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PostSubject: Story of brothers   Mon May 28, 2007 8:26 pm

whal this is the first part of my tale (if you will like it i will put the secand part)



My story begins 20 years ago when I was 13 years old,. Me and my sister Mishell (8 years old in that time) lived with our parents in a town placed in the north side of silverpine forest a peaceful town with homy feeling, from what I can remember. At my 13th year old birthday, the whole family went on tripe to Bril. IN the east side of lordaron capital we did a picnic and as kids me and misheel saw a rabbit and play with it. In time we got pretty far from mom and dad but I always knew where the picnic place was. Suddenly we heard one laude roar coming from all directions, I grabbed Misheel's hand, and started running to mom and dad.
Near the place that the picnic was, I saw two men. I stopped near a tree, my luck shine that day and they didn't notice us I whispered Misheel to be quite. I took a good look at these men, they both hade a bow and sword but one of them hade a big bag and something in the size of a watermelon was in there and I thinke red likead heve been shoked in that bag! They looked on something, then mishell and I got closer in order to listen and this is what we heard:
The man without the bag asked: "So how did you kill them?"
The second man answer: "Easily I took their head off. hehe isn't it nice?"
NO it isn't!! "Father, mother and there were two kids wasn't it?"
Apparently the kids weren't with their parents!
I grabbed Mishell's hand and I saw she was confused and in kind of a shock we started to run to where my parents should be at, until this point I acted on instincts but when we got to the picnic place I couldn't control my self…There was no sign of any picnic, there was only blood all over the place, I started to cry like a one year old baby. I felt empty, my soul left me, my eyes went blank I was awake but wasn't, I should hear poor Mishell crying to me "SHON SHON! Where are they? Where is mom? Where is dad? Why are you crying? What happened? SSHHOONN!!"
When I opened my eyes I found myself in a small cave. I looked around, it was dark probably the late time of the night, Mishell looked at me hear eyes where what from crying I didn't know what to do and what to say I know she didn't realize what is happening. "Don't worry sis' it's going to be all right" I tried to smile but tears take the smile away. We spend the night in that cave we didn't sleep we didn't talked a lot, up until I decided to tell her that mom and dad are dead and we are alone in this world. Her eyes went blank she was there but she wasn't. I thought she was going to die too, so I started screaming at her to wake up. A wolf near by heard my voice and came to the cave. I noticed him before he got into the small cave; I looked at Mishell and yell towards her: "RUN!!!"
But her mind wasn't there, she looked but she didn't move at all, I grabbed her hand; it was freezing as if she wasn’t alive. I pulled her and started to run, she ran with me but I could see that she didn't want to live anymore; it was in the early morning, I started to scream for help but with no answer. No one was there to help us. Suddenly I fell and started to roll over a cliff full of rocks, Mishell rolled behind me. I found my self on the ground near Mishell, her eyes still without a soul. I looked behind us and there my biggest fear stood; the wolf was standing there.
He jumped on us with his white sharp teeth. It was then; there was no way we could run! We were done for! It was a nightmare, I wished to wake up from, but it is for real, no running from the truth. But then, an Allianc guard appeared, Atron his name, he didn't think the same as I did, he came from no where and he swing his mace and finish that wolf. He didn't have his armor or helmet with him so I could see his face. He looked at us, he could see a boy and a girl, full of broses and scratches, he looked at Mishell's eyes for a second time, and he saw how lifeless they were. He lifted her into the air and hugged her. Her eyes became normal again and she screamed like I never heard her before; a desperate scream, full of grief and pain. "Hay there where is your mom and dad?" he asked us. I started to cry and hugged him as hard as I could. He lifted me into the air as well. Me and Mishell hugged him he was our only hope. All the way to Bril he told us comforting as: "don't worry, it will be ok I promis."


thank you for reading it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Story of brothers   Mon May 28, 2007 9:43 pm

Sweet story! is that all there is to it?
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PostSubject: Re: Story of brothers   Tue May 29, 2007 1:15 am

no no there is secand and maby third part i will write tham soon i hope:)
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PostSubject: Re: Story of brothers   Wed Jun 13, 2007 10:36 am

id like to see >w<b nice story so far
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